RE: Decentralized Music Platform | Crypto Academy / S5W3 | Homework Post for @wahyunahrul
Hi @hadassah26, Thanks for taking my class.
Based on the homework that you have made, here are the details of the assessment you get:
| Assessment Aspect | Score |
|---|---|
| Understanding Questions | 0.6/2 |
| Quality of Assignments | 0.7/2 |
| Writing Procedure and Structure | 0.5/1 |
| Follows Rules and Guidelines | 0.8/1.5 |
| Grammar and clarity of information delivery | 0.5/1 |
| Effort in Submission of Information | 0.5/1.5 |
| #Club5050 | 1/1 |
| Total | 4.6/10 |
My Reviews and Suggestions:
In general, many of the explanations are very shallow and lack information.
Give more effort to the tasks you create.
Your explanation on questions number 1 and 2 is lacking.
In question number 1 you should provide concrete evidence of the impact caused by the presence of Audius with news screenshots or whatever.
The description of the features on Audius is still too minimal in information, please provide a more detailed explanation of the features that you show.
Your explanation in question number 6 is still too shallow and you should show an illustration of the mechanism for uploading content to Audius.
Conclusion is still too little. Try to include a summary of all the discussions that have been made.
Your writing structure can still be improved.
Don't get into the habit of using markdown quotes for each discussion title, use header variations so that the title can be seen clearly.