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RE: [Beginner Course] Steemit Crypto Academy //Season 3- Week 7// HOMEWORK for professor @wahyunahrul | Decentralized Apps (DApps) - Future Apps From Blockchain System//@fiaznawaz
Hi @fiaznawaz, Thanks for taking my class.
Based on the homework that you have made, here are the details of the assessment you get:
| Personal opinion on DApps replacing Centralized Apps | ||
| Possible data theft via DApps | ||
| How to promote a DApps | ||
| Analysis of a DApps | ||
| DApps creation plan | ||
| Conclusion | ||
| Writing procedure and structure | ||
| Following the Rules and Guidelines | ||
My Reviews and Suggestions:
You have completed the given task.
Your article writing structure is messy.
Use numbered lists, bullet listed, etc. to highlight important points.
You only explained the features of the DApp you chose, but you did not explain why the DApp is good to use compared to other similar DApps.
An explanation of the DApp you want to make is still very lacking, the information you provide does not make many people interested in the application.
You didn't make conclusions related to the topic of discussion.
Thanks very much for your response