In the end, it's all about the balance; interconnectedness of nature and the importance of maintaining ecosystem balance...

A very thought-provoking topic!

And as @wakeupkitty said, you can work on your writing style. Even if English is not your first language, you can try dedicating half an hour or so to reading works from authors like her. I'm sure you will take these suggestions positively. I know you have a lot of potential.

Happy posting :)