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RE: The love changed my life dream

in Dream Steem3 days ago (edited)

What an interesting beginning and sad ending could this be, wow love is really a powerful magic that can take someone to another world without paying transportation.

The lines in your poem is something worth reading especially the from stanza one to stanza four. I wish it never ended.

Love has a positive and negative side effects, it can donate to a great happiness and a light that brighten the day even in the night, when love strikes, it results in heartbreak, depression, emotionally damage, i can picture all of these in your poem.

Sometimes we're unlucky to stay in relationship with the right person, at this point love looks like a fake but it doesn't, i accept the fact that fake love exists but trust me, true love exists too.

Honestly speaking, stanza five to eight is so touching and heartbreaking, i screenshot this post to my WhatsApp status, my friends needs to see it too.

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Screenshot from my WhatsApp status.

I want to ask, is this poem a true life story?

You punished a nice story, keep it up.

#comment #wewrite

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I never received such warm love from comment ever I am feeling honored and pleased thank you dear friend for your support and yeah its my true life poem which is going on with me.

Blessings

It was always hurt when the person we love, trust and give our hearts to later turns to break it down, i feel how painful and heartbroken that was and i must admit the moment was really complicated to endure.

I feel sorry for the all messed up, i believe you'll soon be okay. Take heart 💜

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