Your presentation was good but as @anailuj1992 mentioned in her reply is very correct that it should be favourite of child and child should be familiar and connected to this video game and they can have fun which is lacking here.
You can suggest my video game to your child. Please have a look. My daughter loves to play and she learns also while playing and it can run without internet also . Have a look :
https://steemit.com/children-s21w5/@yourloveguru/slc-s21w5-video-games
It's true that the connection is felt when the child is familiar with the game.