I will give this article 9 out of 10. First I gave it 8 but then I gave it 9 because I remembered the day when my son came into this world. And the greatest joy of my life was when he came into my arms and I thanked God for hearing his cry.
In the most difficult time for a woman, with the help of God, we gain new life and bring a new life into this world. And that is the moment when we truly appreciate our mother.
So you give 1 point extra because you suddenly remembered something (you gave birth) or?
You know this is about writing, skills, niches, reaching the reader by the words, pictures we use. That's what the grade you give should be based on. Whereis it you stand among all those other writers? Is your yext better than what you read in average on Steemit? If so why?
First of all, I want to know whether this is a criticism or a question.
I had thought of 8 marks for this article, but in this post I wanted to describe the courage and strength of a woman in clear words. I have described some sad moments, some moments of pain, and finally moments of happiness in this article and then I felt that 9 marks, not 8 marks, is right in terms of a woman's thinking.
I did not want to compete with other steemians. I completed my writing with the words that expressed my own thoughts and happiness. And I am proud of what I have written and I am satisfied with the grade I have given.
And this was the principle of the program itself that you should feel free to write whatever you want to write, in which you are happy. No one will judge us. We have to grade our posts ourselves, so our posts cannot be criticized. If anyone has any questions, feel free to ask, but no criticism.
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So you mean Lesson 5 ended here because we will not comment and be critical?
Thanks for letting me know.