Hi @polaleye50. I'm always concerned with someone who makes a lengthy medical article as there was a lot of medical jargon being used in a single article.
- My point is, it is better to make it into a few parts so that you can explain clearly each and every medical term you have been using in your article for the benefit of your laymen's reader. For example; flame haemorrhages, cotton wool spots.
- Add a few more pictures to motivate readers to keep on reading.
@chloroform thanks for your observation. I will improve on that 9n the next article. All point of corrections are noted.