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RE: This is my haiku - Este es mi haiku - Mizu no Oto - Edition #47
I see the gulls as watching the swans too, like a couple watching another family.
In this haiku, all the elements are both themselves and human.
I like this.
I like your observation and that you agree with me on the vision of haiku, based on the vision of the birds.