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RE: Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku - Edition #27 (English)
Haiku lovers, with my love I also leave my entrance to the contest:
Once it was new.
Also a boat gets old
and falls, sinking.
Once it was new.
Also a boat gets old
and falls, sinking.
After my publication I keep thinking about the idea of the boat as the cradle of mermaids.
I'm going to share them
The disused boat
sinks with grace,
cradle of sirens.
The disused boat
sinks with grace,
cradle of sirens.
I love your second haiku! Rethinking about it has been a good choice.