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RE: Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku - WEEK #22
Sure I am past the deadline, but I saw the picture just before bed, and then with hearing speculation on being less than 5/7/5 thought of this when I should be sleeping. Here is my under the count sudden thought, although probably not hitting enough of the other criteria, I do want to have a think and play with this under the count but on the rest idea.
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Orange crushed dreams
As winter comes to set
Trees await their buds
You weren't past the deadline! A great haiku, this is closer to the requirements than what you think