An Original Haiku: Failed Love
FAILED LOVE
Comes like a white dove,
This up and down thing called love,
Over with a shove!
AN ORIGINAL HAIKU - ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
What are Haikus?
Haikus are a Japanese traditional poetry form which uses 17 morae to tell a story. In English the accepted format is 17 syllables in a 5-7-5 line structure.
Why are Haikus an art form ?
The challenge is to express your thoughts with with a minimum of words, similarly to Earnest Hemingway's famous six word sentence.
Learn more about Haikus - here!
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This is a post I previously used in a contest not as a blog post - and as the theme tied in with HHG-9. I've decided to recall it for HHG-9.
I really like the various works of poetry and photos let me Resteem your best poems and photos.
@arjoena20 - Thank-you I truly appreciate your kind words and your kind gesture. It is appreciated. I would love to upvote your comment but my vote is below the dust threshold so - you won't get it.
Have you heard about the dust threshold?
None-the-less, I will see if I can rather upvote one of your posts. I usually upvote my posts after 3 day to reward my curators.
Thanks for the explanation, I just want to resteem the various poems when I am active, although my upvote is not that meaningful, but I just want to point out an appreciation of what has been done
@arjoena20 - Fair enough. I do appreciate your kind gesture.
I am doing my small bit to keep people informed about some of the goings on. It hope having the following knowledge may assist you in some way.
Here is a link - to dust threshold discussion
Oh that feeling of love. Sometimes bitter, sometimes sweet.
A feeling that can make or break a man.
Hha! @jacksondavies - The voice of experience!?
Something like that.
The feeling of heartbreak sent me on the path to becoming the man I am today.
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Hii @rlt47 the gif looks very heart-wrenching. women pushed men with anger, apparently the limit of patience is gone.
such is love, sometimes it hurts.
Very good @poocut, You speak with very very good insight... :))
Hi @rlt47, Greetings from HHG9! Here's an upvote for this lovely Haiku and also my counter Haiku lol :D
Failed Love
Come when love is gone
Missing someone that we love
Faded Like wind blows
Wow @ainie.kashif - I like the idea that you now respond in Haikus too...lol!
Also your Haikus are becoming more and more sophisticated! Well done.
hahahah... I dunno why I feel like responding in Haiku as well... just got carried away in the same emotion when I read your Haiku :D
Hello @rlt47, I always like to learn something new, the most beautiful thing of this group has been to know different cultures, I give you this haiku, I hope I have learned something.
We are like the loose wind
In love you win and lose
There is always a good reason.
I will publish it in the Hello Hello Group 9.