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RE: An Unfortunate Adventure! #freewritemadness: Day Eighteen
while the "meat" of the "bones" may still be missing after the challenge completion, I can see the ending to this story, somewhat... not self-contained, but with a clear north, you have now a true enamy, a conflict, and the heroes... the rest of the world?, it is there, giving only the pieces of itself that are needed, more that that depends on what you decide to do with this after november. Well done!