Freewrite : Hate, a chronology.

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"I hate sophie!!! " The high pitched voice of an angered five year old disturbed the once quiet room, followed by a loud bang of door.
"Oh don't worry princess, mama will buy you a prettier barbie tomorrow" The soothing voice of a mother was then heard amidst the sobbing sounds.

"Gosh I hate this class." Thr twelve year old mumbled, scribbling her way on the answer sheet as her brows furrows together. 'You can't pass the grade if you fail one of the classes' the words kept ringing in her head and she coyld't help but feel how unfair that was. If she was ever to be a principal, she wouldn't made such stupid rules.

"I can't believe my phone is stolen, ugh I hate this world! " She was fifteen, a dramatic normal teen who had just lost her source of communication with the world, she has the right to be mad at everyone.
"Why would you even go there, you know that neighbourhood only has bad people." Her friend sighed "My dad said that its all they could do, stealing."

"That's just weird." a look of disgust formed on her face as she watches the scene before her.
"what is? " Her boyfriend asked, leaning on the couch while texting on his phone.
"Them" She gestured towards the group of people before them. "Don't you think thats werd too? "
A small moment if silence before the boy glancee at the direction "huh. It's weird? Just let them be."
"That's all you have to say? "
The boy shrugged "Its not my buiseness and its not interfering."
"They look like they could do bad things, I hate this feeling."

"I hate taxes" She grumbles, jamming her card back into her wallet before turning around and bumping into a middleage man. Mumbling apologies, she helps the male pick his things up, her nose scrunching at the bad odor of the male. "Thanks miss" The male said, "I was so scared the coupon flew away"
She grimaces and left while wondering why did the man receive free meals while she is the one paying the taxes.

There was just nothing right in this world and she felt helpless in not being able to put things right.

"Mam, mam. I'm from e-news, may I ask why do you hate this policy so much."
She smiles, wrinkles crinkling at the side of her eyes. "Hate is such a atrong word, Im not hating on anything, Im just doing my best to set things straight, it us for the greater good." She waves and goes into her car. It has been a long journey, the once soft skin had now turned hard but she thinks that it is all worth it. She can finally set things straight, like how she thinks it should be. She is not hating, people just have to understand that some does not deserve the love or mercy.


The prompt intrigue me and I had fun writing it though Im not sure if I was able to write down what I really mean.

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Woah
What a sad life...
I always remind the kids not to flippantly use the word hate
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Thank you for reading ^^ yes indeed, it is always best to educate kids on it as most of us starts creating habits and [erceptions on life when we are kids.

The prompt sounds really fun and lighthearted, I will make sure to have time to write something.

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