Excellent poetry! I love the rhythmic beat and the message comes out loud and clear. Applause for the ending.
Cracking and breaking, pushing and forcing
a wedge of brutal love into my atrophic heart.
Excellent poetry! I love the rhythmic beat and the message comes out loud and clear. Applause for the ending.
Cracking and breaking, pushing and forcing
a wedge of brutal love into my atrophic heart.
Thanks!
To be fair, I did wrestle with it a bit after the 5min to get it right...
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I can understand. I usually get my poetry draft in the 5 minutes and clean it up before posting.
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