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RE: Overdrive: a short fiction story [Part II]

in #freewrite6 years ago (edited)

First... I like the idea that you're a stare-at-the-moon type of guy. Lol! 😂😂😂 Wala lang, gusto ko lang sabihin yan.

Seriously, I still can't get over the fact that you made the narration in a conversational type (tipong tropa tropa lang) and yet you managed to produce an intelligently-stitched story. Paano mo ginagawa yan Jazz?🤔Aside from the excellent material to share, you conveyed how good of a writer and a storyteller you are.Great job as always! Been a fan since the tagalog work you shared (yung may bulag na main character).

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Lol. Nahuli mo ang aking emo moment nun high school. Graduate na ako sa pagka-emo pero moody pa din hanggang ngayon 😂

Salamat sa feedback. Ang casual na style ay tinugma ko para mas maging kwela ang horror experience. Nakaflatter ang iyong comment XD Salamat sa support, Val.

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