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RE: Blasted Out Shells

in #freewrite6 years ago

You must be sad for the story ends around this climax
Insert comedic relief here

Awesome, haha. You've got quite a dry sense of humour in a lot of your pieces and it always gets me...

The stanza just afterward is wonderful too, the imagination fading, the wizard stepping back - great images which capture that sense of reversal through time.

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I always value your thoughtfully poetic feedback!

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