The end seems like the end of a beginning or the beginning of an end, to me it was quit a good end leaving everyone to think of the end they accommodate, so we all join you in the free writing by writing the end in our minds so that's a good way to end making your readers participate in your writing, when you began to talk a lotion and skin, I began to feel the story is going to the sunburn.........but all of a sudden gay came in, judgement, perception, point of views, got readers thinking and participating, then the story becomes long and long until it become a long long story. I really wanna hear what Vee have to say..........thanks for writing and sharing my friend