Ski - Freewrite

in #freewrite7 years ago

John and Mary were the best skiers on the team.

The slalom would be coming up in two weeks time.

One of them was a lock to win.

They were very competitive people.


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They also happened to be brother and sister.

John spent all his time practicing. He didn't have a lot of hobbies outside of school.

It wasn't necessarily that he liked to ski......it's just that it was all he knew how to do.

Mary downright hated it.

Their parents had been professional skiers and they made them practice every day since they were little kids.

Both of them had been planning to quit when they were about 12.

That was the year that their parents had died in an unfortunate accident.

They felt obligated to keep going, to keep skiing, to keep practicing all the time.

Sure enough now they were the best.

Being the best at something that you love is a really great thing.

Being the best at something you can't stand doing though? That can be a problem.

John won that slalom and Mary came in second place.

They just kept on skiing, and practicing, and skiing, and practicing as if there were some meaning to it all.

They were caught in a trap of their own obligations.

It was a trap that they made themselves though.

Their parents would never have wanted them to do something that they couldn't stand doing though. In fact, if their parents had still been alive they would have insisted they quit skiing if they knew how much they hated it.

Don't let yourself get caught in the trap of obligation.

Do whatever makes you happy.

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So true. I think to many times, we do things just because we think it's what others want us to do. Maybe not to this extreme, though. Then again, they made their choice. That ostrich, though. 😂

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Thanks for commenting. I thought it was a pretty good freewrite.

A meaningful story for those childrens who prefer their dreams more than parents words☺

Oh, I know that trap only too well!!

one more reason to keep believing in your self and your dreams.

wow,that is one awesome ostrich

Well it's good at skiing but he's not a very good cook.

well that's a good story embedded with a much needed message especially for those who're in the midst of choosing their dream or following their parents wish . Thanks for sharing .

Greta write up, I personally things being fairly good at something you love is better than being the best at something you dont enjoy

Love that ostrich gif LOL

Doing something you love is much better than doing something you don't enjoy even if you suck at doing it if you ask me.

Yes I do fully agree

we have also some ostric on our lab.
but not like this....

A nice story but i think we have to follow our parents more than our dreams because parents always think best for their childrens :) This story has a deep meaning inside :)

Meaningful story
Thank you for sharing

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