Side effects include

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"Side effects from taking Nutrica may include: dry lips, vision loss, joint sensitivity, hair loss, hemorrhaging, ulcers, renal failure, heart failure, strokes and multi-fractal hallucinagenic symptoms."

Wringing her knuckles to alleviate the tenderness, she moved back from the tv. She had been sitting fairly close to try to eliminate the halos of light that blurred her sight. How was it possible that she started to feel these side effects only after cleaning up her Nutrica addiction? Absent-mindedly, she felt her back pocket. Her fingers lightly traced the outline of a business card beneath the denim material. Why had she kept Nurse Nutter's card? She was too rational to use it, but too anxious to toss it.

Biting her lip, she immediately regretted it. The taste of warm metal flowed over her tongue as she nursed her cracked mouth, sucking the skin gently. No amount of balm had been able to keep her mouth moisturized. The futility of the situation and the fear of the unknown brought tears stinging to her eyes. As she wiped the tears away harshly, she cringed at the pain that surged through her fingers.

"Damn it!" Grabbing her house keys, she sprinted to her front door. The pharmacy down the street had to stock something that would help.

Rushing had taken its toll. Her ankles, knees, and hips throbbed after her short journey, but now she would fill a basket with items promising relief. In aisle 4, a commotion disturbed her search.

"Leave before I call security."

"PLEASE! It burns and I can't - CHANGE! Just a few cents for - SEE, everything is red - BREAD!. Just a few coins!" The woman's head was a patchwork of straw-like hair, and bald, scabbed scalp. She jerked her body back and forth, as if she was possessed. Like two separate identities battling in one person, she fought to control the demons struggling to get out.

"Come to Aisle 4 please." The young manager touched the red button on his radio to ask for assistance.

"I'M LEEEEEEEEEEEAVING!"

It was more the shriek of a banshee than the cry of a woman. As she hobbled down the aisle, her face contorted in pain with each step. The blood red eyes of the woman were horrifying, but that's not what held the girl's attention. It was Nurse Nutter.

Visibly shaking, the girl paid for the items in the basket, praying silently that they would bring healing to her body. The sound of the exit doors whooshed open, but before she stepped out onto the street, her eyes blinked rapidly. In one eye, she saw the street before her. Her focus changed to the other eye, and she was back in Aisle 4. She jerked her head as if to clear her mind like an Etch-a-Sketch. Her two eyes focused once again on the street before her.

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Great writing as always my dear. Tag me too if you like, I would like to keep up with the write. Be well

I certainly will!!!! Thanks - I think i finally do know where it's going hahahaha i didn't know before - but now.... i THINK i know :)

I haven't even opened the box for my mic yet.... i think tomorrow is the day for testing it hehehehe


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WOW, no nutrica for me :) lol, love this story, so cool @dreemsteem!
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Hehe yeah nutrica is made by bad dudes. Lolololl

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Poor nurse Nutter. And so interesting to see the future and the past. sure glad that my eyes don't do it - but I could fix it easily. Just take off my glasses and both are a blur :)

"I'm Leeeeeaving" was my favorite part. Reminds me of that one time at band camp, just kidding, but yeah, so cool.

Hahahahahahhahaa!!!!!!!

Oh my - poor Nurse Nutter! This drug is truly terrifying. I can't wait to see what reality is like without it! Such a great series!

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Yeah poor Nuttynurse! She's unraveling quickly.... Not sure how long she has!

Very well done, thanks for sharing. I'm amazed at your storytelling skils.

Wow! I appreciate the compliment!!! Thanks so much 😊

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Deja vu?

Reminds me of NZT from Limitless but something says it is a bit more spooky? Will there be a Halloween special ending? Has this been many words yet, I hope so. :)

Maybe nutrica breeds a parasite in her that then takes her mind over and slowly they replace her, is she in transition?

Noice story.

I do hope she got some special products to deal with all that blood

Not the place I want the words ... And you know it.

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Yes boss right away boss uhm boss... May I go to the bathroom boss?

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I loved that movie!!!! But this is a drug that makes everybody stupid, controllable and happy clappy. Like that term? I stole it from someone!

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Can't handle those happy clappy buggers they irk me.

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Neither could she... So she got off the drug. See? Not like Limitless.

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Said reminds not it is exactly like that. Comment has been weighed, measured and found wanting :)

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Hmm de ja vu.

That comment reminds me of the Bible.

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Speaking of the bible have you read hyperboles thursday post? Hehe

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No... His posts confuse me like yours do lolol

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