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RE: Unacceptable grief- A we-write 5 minute freewrite
Wow!!
And I thought @negativer was brutal. This is profound, and hard-hitting, like a semi truck speeding into the story to knock us flat.
That Gary. What a guy. #gottaloveGary!
I hope Jody recovers eventually.... waaaait, wait, wait, this is FICTION.
Tell me this was not inspired by some real-life grieving mother you know.
well done, @sarez!
You must share the blame. It was your entry which gave me the idea of an errant son.
LOL! You took yours in such a different direction. I take no credit at all. Just expanded on the prompt, and you took it from there - skillfully, and chillingly! I am haunted!