I'm afraid that I'm in with the crowd who doesn't understand why Mr. Lion, then Mandy, started to cry. I enjoyed reading your lead in, how you wrote her nervousness and the bit where she felt she had to work on her smile made me chuckle.
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I'm afraid that I'm in with the crowd who doesn't understand why Mr. Lion, then Mandy, started to cry. I enjoyed reading your lead in, how you wrote her nervousness and the bit where she felt she had to work on her smile made me chuckle.