Movement- A five-minute short story for @mariannewest
Movement- A five minute short story for @mariannewest
Movement
The more I move the less I think and the more I feel.
I can't think when I move because all I can think about is what I feel so technically am I really not thinking?
I feel wind caressing me I fell the salt water air making my nose run and freezing my eyeball water causing me to tear up. I see light gleaming of the waves and ripples and endless caressing movements of the ocean's surface I feel warmth and heat from the sun beating down on me and cold from the air. I feel light as a feather in the ocean waves compared to when I'm swimming in a non-salt pool. as I seem to find it harder to float in there and much more tiring.
I feel the grains of sand below my toenails. And in my knickers and bikini top. When I'm skinny dipping I feel it and the salt and cold water with the warm currental swishy flow blow my flappy bits around massaging me in ways I didn't know could relax me. I feel it lift my tits as a wave rolls in.
I fell the thwack whenever I leap off of the gantry and into the deep water beneath and feel the fear and exulting adrenaline of risk plunging through my veins as I think about sharks and stingrays. I love the beach more than any other place I can visit when it comes to movement. It's where I wish I lived.
I wish I were a mermaid or a water spirit so I could cut through the currents and flow with the tide. To be a drop of water in a sea of hydrogenated salty moving water. Witness the ebb and flow of life and spring in the ocean and watch the animals and plant life and play with them.
To touch a slimy octopus and watch it walk around to chill with the pretty vibrant fishies never getting vertigo.
That is what I really really really want. All that kind of movement! Whereas any other time, I can't move well unless I'm listening to some music and even then the most I get done is a bit of booty bouncing. And bugger all housework.
I want to never ever not be on the beach. I even want to be apart of the beach when a natural disaster hits. To feel it. Only not as a human!
By @anonymummy
This definitely makes me want to swim in the ocean again...it's been years. It's nice that yoy feel so at home there.
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thanks @freedomtowrite
Well done!! I was right in the ocean with you!!
thankyou i used www.themostdangerouswritingapp.com which you mentioned.it's fun!
Thumb's up! No voting power, but really like your freewrite and the sensations it evokes. This is an especially great line for this, the salt and cold water with the warm currental swishy flow blow my flappy bits around massaging me.
lol. shucks! thanks. the crazy thing is Id normally be a bit less cough, cough... but I used www.themostdangerouswritingapp.com for the five-minute challenge. It lets anything you write if you stop for more than 3 seconds before the minute is up. So I literally had to write whatever came to my head! Which in my case is always the truth. you know that game where you have to answer as many personal questions in thirty seconds without pausing or the answer is a lie?
I suppose it's a great creative help!
glad I made someone feel something! lol
I'll have to give that a try--both the mostdangerouswritingapp and the game! Sounds intriguing :)