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RE: SLC21/WK6: Understanding Burns: Types, Causes, and First Aid Responses
Student Name: @nanidi
Overall grade: 6.8
Plagiarism Check: Pass
AI Use: no
| Question | What the Student Did Well | Areas for Improvement | Grading |
|---|---|---|---|
| Question 1 | Provided the course of action in this specific situation . | The answer is too concise. There's no mention of cleaning the site. No lose and dry bandage. No mention of taking the child for medical support. Important details are missing such as the student didn't mention prioritizing their own safety first. This is a very important step. There's no mention of gloves or a wrapper. There's no mention of giving child psychological support. | [Grade: 0.8] |
| Question 2 | the student listed down the course of action for an electrical burn. | There's no mention of wearing PPEs or gloves or prioritizing one's own safety | [Grade: 1.7] |
| Question 3 | Listed the steps of managing an emergency chemical burning scenario. | The problem in the first aid was not flushing the burn site for a longer period of time. Atleast 20 minutes of flushing is recommended for a chemical burn. No mention of PPEs | [Grade: 1.3] |
| Question 4 | The student managed to present their logic in choosing the answer. | The ethics as well as the Triage dictate that the patient with a 2nd degree burn should be treated first as the patient with a third degree burn has his nerves damaged so currently he is not in severe pain whereas the patient with a 2nd degree burn might be going through excruciating pain and if not attended immediately would be left with grave consequences | [Grade: 1] |
| Question 5 | the student managed to present an infographic. Infographics in the medicine field serve as important tool for having access to more information in a single place. These are typically necessary to have as a first aider. | [Grade: 2] |
General Feedback: The student has shown a good understanding of this week's course. I definitely enjoyed reading your article. There were a few shortcomings which I'm sure will be avoided in the upcoming posts.
Thank you.
Regards,
@huzaifanaveed1