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RE: SLC21/WK5: Choking and Airway Obstruction: A Complete Guide to Life-Saving First Aid Techniques
Student Name: @aril.hatake
Overall grade: 6.1
Plagiarism Check: Pass
AI Use: No
| Question | What the Student Did Well | Areas for Improvement | Grading |
|---|---|---|---|
| Question 1 | Provided what are the changes in a body that causes partial airway obstruction compared to complete airway obstruction. Good work. | A few details are missing such as some people have allergies to some food items. Also the information of the respiratory tract and the food obstruction in other than the esophagus would have been nice. The mention of universal choking sign is missing.This information would have been nice. The information regarding the lack of oxygen in the body is also missing. | [Grade: 1.7] |
| Question 2 | Outlined the approach of performing back blows. | You didn't demonstrate the Heimlich Maneuver but I'd still rate your question giving you a benefit of doubt that you didn't have any elder person in the house at the moment. The back blows that you demonstrated are on point but you didn't mention the chest thrusts. | [Grade: 1.8] |
| Question 3 | Listed the steps of managing an emergency choking scenario. | You pick one person from the bystanders and authorize him/her to call the ambulance. You also haven't mentioned how to remove the obstruction if the patient has foreign object stuck in this throat. You didn't mention what to do if the person gets unconscious. The information about CPR is missing. The number of thrusts are missing. | [Grade: 1.6] |
| Question 4 | The student failed to present an infographic. Infographics in the medicine field serve as important tool for having access to more information in a single place. These are typically necessary to have as a first aider. But the student demonstrated his own actions on how to control choking scenario. | [Grade: 1] |
General Feedback: The student has shown an average nderstanding of this week's course. There were a few shortcomings which I'm sure will be avoided in the upcoming posts.
Thank you.
Regards,
@huzaifanaveed1