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RE: SLC21/WK5: Choking and Airway Obstruction: A Complete Guide to Life-Saving First Aid Techniques
Student Name: @fajrulakmal99
Overall grade: 5
Plagiarism Check: Pass
AI Use: No
| Question | What the Student Did Well | Areas for Improvement | Grading |
|---|---|---|---|
| Question 1 | Provided what are the changes in a body that causes partial airway obstruction compared to complete airway obstruction. Good work. | A few details are missing such as some people have allergies to some food items. Also the information of the respiratory tract and the food obstruction in other than the esophagus would have been nice. The mention of universal choking sign is missing.This information would have been nice. | [Grade: 2] |
| Question 2 | Outlined the approach of performing a Heimlich maneuver. | You didn't mention the number of thrusts. You have some clear shortcomings in this question. Reread it and you'll find them. You've written 'head' instead of 'hand.' You didn't demonstrate the Heimlich maneuver which was an important part of the question. | [Grade: 1.2] |
| Question 3 | Listed the steps of managing an emergency choking scenario. | You pick one person from the bystanders and authorize him/her to call the ambulance. You also haven't mentioned how to remove the obstruction if the patient has foreign object stuck in this throat. You didn't mention what to do if the person gets unconscious. The information about CPR is missing . | [Grade: 1.8] |
| Question 4 | The student failed to present an infographic. Infographics in the medicine field serve as important tool for having access to more information in a single place. These are typically necessary to have as a first aider. | [Grade: 0] |
General Feedback: The student has shown an average nderstanding of this week's course. There were a few shortcomings which I'm sure will be avoided in the upcoming posts.
Thank you.
Regards,
@huzaifanaveed1