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RE: SLC21/WK5: Asfixia y obstrucción de las vías respiratorias: una guía completa sobre técnicas de primeros auxilios que salvan vidas
Student Name: @nanidi
Overall grade: 7.8
Plagiarism Check: Pass
AI Use: No
| Question | What the Student Did Well | Areas for Improvement | Grading |
|---|---|---|---|
| Question 1 | Provided what signs and symptoms are seen when a patient has partial airqay obstruction compared to complete airway obstruction. | There are a few shortcomings in this question as you didn't mention what causes these sort of obstructions. Aome people are allergic to certain edibles which may cause sudden partial or complete obstruction whereas some people might have something stuck in their airway passage. | [Grade: 1.8] |
| Question 2 | Outlined a step-by-step approach of performing a heimlich maneuver. | The student has demonstrated a good understanding of the heimlich maneuver but the important term of 'thrusting' is missing. Remember, during the Heimlich maneuver, upward movement of the hand is not necessary, but upward thrust are of utmost priority with force as it will help in clearing the airway obstruction. | [Grade: 2.1] |
| Question 3 | Listed the steps of managing an emergency choking scenario. | The explanation was too concise. It could have been elaborated further for instance , the first step would alsways be to assess the situation. You mentioned a obese person in this answer and for that your compressions should be on the chest with your arms coming in from under the armpits and the compressions should be inwards. Each and everyone of your family member shouldn't be calling the medical help, unstead you should clearly point out at one person to do it for you, to avoid confusion. If you notice the person is unconscious, only do a finger sweep if the obstructing item is visible and never be too hard while sweeping, to avoid pushing the object further in. | [Grade: 1.4] |
| Question 4 | The student managed to present an infographic. Infographics in the medicine field serve as important tool for having access to more information in a single place. These are typically necessary to have as a first aider. | [Grade: 2.5] |
General Feedback: The student needs to focus more on the details of the questions separately and come up with detailed answers which would be beneficial for him in the future as well. The student demonstrates a good understanding of managing with choking scenarios.
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@huzaifanaveed1