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RE: SLC21/WK3 | Managing Bleeding: The Basics of Controlling External and Internal Bleeding
Student Name: @fajrulakmal99
Overall grade: 4.1
Plagiarism Check: Pass
AI Use: No
| Question | What the Student Did Well | Areas for Improvement | Grading |
|---|---|---|---|
| Question 1 | The student managed to list down the steps of applying a bandage | The student missed out on listing down important steps, such as tying the bandage in an spiralling manner. The step of firmly pressing the bandage also seems missing | [Grade: 1.5] |
| Question 2 | The student managed to list down steps of applying a tourniquet. | Similar to the first question, the student msised out on important details such as not mentioning that a tourniquet shouldn't be applied on a joint. The centimeters/ inches are not mentioned. The technique of knots is not mentioned. The student needs to put in more details in this question. | [Grade: 1] |
| Question 3 | Listed the steps of managing an emergency bleeding case. | The student failed to mention the DRABC protocol. The student also failed to list down a detailed explanation of how to manage this bleeding case such as using a tourniquet as a large resort. Using a clean cloth. Prioritizing one's safety first. Call the medical staff. All of these details are very important yet missing in his assignment | [Grade: 0.7] |
| Question 4 | The student listed the steps on managing the case | The student failed to mention the difference in approach keeping in mind the consciousness of the patient. Failed to mention the first aider's safety first. Failed to mention the DRABC protocol. | [Grade: 0.9] |
| Question 5 | The student failed to present an infographic (visual Illustration ) | [Grade: 0] |
General Feedback: The student needs to focus more on the details of the questions separately and come up with detailed answers which would be beneficial for him in the future as well. The student demonstrates an understanding of managing bleeding and procedures of controlling internal and external bleeding but needs more explanation and practical approach in certain areas.
Thank you.
Regards,
@huzaifanaveed1
Thanks my bro