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RE: "SLC21/WK1: Potenciar habilidades para salvar vidas: una guía para la primera respuesta y los primeros auxilios básicos”
Student Name: @wilmer1988
Time of checking: Within 24 hours of the homework
Overall Grade: [5.7/10]
Plagiarism Check: Pass
AI Use: No
| Question | What the Student Did Well | Areas for Improvement | Grading |
|---|---|---|---|
| Question 1 | Shared a compelling personal experience about dealing with a respiratory obstruction in an emergency, emphasizing the critical need for basic first aid knowledge. | To improve this answer, you could discuss specific first aid techniques that would apply to similar scenarios now. This addition would show an understanding of how new skills would change your response if faced with a similar situation in the future. | [Grade: 1.4] |
| Question 2 | Described a well-structured approach using the DRABC protocol, showing awareness of situational risks and the steps needed to address them. | Consider providing more details on each step, such as how you would handle breathing obstructions and check vital signs. You have a very good understanding of the DRABC protocol; great job! | [Grade: 1.4] |
| Question 3 | Provided emergency numbers for various services in Venezuela, helping readers understand who to contact for different emergencies. | Including a wider variety of emergency services, such as mental health support or poison control, as well as national suicide prevention numbers, would make this list more comprehensive. Adding a brief description of each service would also enhance clarity and accessibility for readers unfamiliar with these services. | [Grade: 0.8] |
| Question 4 | Created a detailed and visually appealing DRABC illustration, helping to clarify the emergency response process. | Improving the illustration’s clarity with distinct labels or icons for each step, along with arrows to guide the flow, would make it even more user-friendly and accessible. You need to be careful about the resolution and clarity of the image. Adding some explanatory text for each step could also be beneficial. | [Grade: 2.1] |
| Question 5 | You didn’t attempt the quiz. | Please be careful next time before submitting your homework; make sure that all the tasks have been completed. | [Grade: 0] |
General Feedback:
Overall, you have demonstrated a solid understanding of first aid principles, but there are areas for improvement that need your attention. Completing all assigned tasks, including quizzes, will be essential for demonstrating your comprehensive knowledge. Keep working on providing detailed explanations and enhancing your visual aids to improve the overall quality of your submissions.
Thank you.
Regards,
@abdu.navi03