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RE: "SLC21/WK1: Empowering Life-Saving Skills: A Guide to First Response and Basic First Aid"
Student Name: @josepha
Time of checking: Within 24 hours of the homework
Overall Grade: [3.9/10]
Plagiarism Check: Pass
AI Use: No
| Question | What the Student Did Well | Areas for Improvement | Grading |
|---|---|---|---|
| Question 1 | Shared a personal experience involving a leg injury during childhood, illustrating the consequences of not applying first aid. | While the personal narrative is compelling, consider providing more detail about how applying first aid could have altered the outcome. Elaborate on specific first aid techniques that could have been used in this situation, such as applying direct pressure to the wound or using a clean cloth to prevent further blood loss. Additionally, clarify the emotional impact of the incident and the lessons learned. Also, the real question was what would have changed if you were the first responder yourself? | [Grade: 1.2] |
| Question 2 | Outlined a clear strategy for responding to a road traffic accident, including ensuring safety and calling for emergency help. | Ensure to follow the DRABC protocol closely. Also, don't call the emergency yourself; rather, ask someone from the crowd to do so. Additionally, you didn't mention anything about checking for the airway passage. Consider describing each step in detail, including what you would do if any of the steps of the DRABC protocol are negative. | [Grade: 1.0] |
| Question 3 | Created an engaging illustration of the DRABC protocol. | The illustration does not explain any of the steps of the DRABC protocol, and some of the words are misspelled. Also, could you please mention which software you used to create it? It looks AI-generated. | [Grade: 0.5] |
| Question 4 | Listed emergency service numbers relevant to Nigeria, fulfilling the assignment's requirements with a comprehensive range of contacts. | Adding context for each number, such as the types of emergency situations for which each number is appropriate, would enhance clarity. Consider including additional services like mental health support and crisis hotlines to broaden the scope of your resource list. | [Grade: 1.2] |
| Question 5 | You did not complete the quiz. | Please double-check before submitting the homework to avoid these problems in the future. | [Grade: 0] |
General Feedback:
Your responses show a solid effort and understanding, though some areas could benefit from more detail and accuracy. Focusing on protocol steps and specific action points in each scenario will strengthen your performance.
Thank you.
Regards,
@abdu.navi03