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RE: Finish The Story Contest - Week #67!

in #finishthestory5 years ago

Oh it's Q&A time.. I like it!
In order to avoid switching to an omniscient narrator, I'll resist the temptation and reply through the mouth, eyes and mind of Ms White.

  1. Crane the machine, being the guy's movements quite mechanic.

  2. I don't know. Peraphs, for the little I can see from this bed, he seemed that he wanted to be elsewhere.

  3. Yup. Same person.

  4. Nice one! No apparent reason but what you suggested could be part of your second half (there's some Freudian blurb I could add on the nurse and doctor's roles but better to not open the Pandora's box).

Hope Ms White clarified the doubts a bit 😉 Ah, thank you for helping @phil-glaz with the translation, that was awesome!

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Thank you! I will build on that. @phil-glaz's writing was easy to translate. To translate your super imaginative writing to Russian took some sweating effort. )))

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