Finish the Story Contest - WEEK #38!
A contest with a pot of 5 STEEM + 5 @steembasicincome shares? You're in the right place!
180 @steembasicincome shares awarded till now, plus 22.558 SBD and 48 STEEM, through the contest in 37 weeks!
What do we have here? But, of course, today's yellow finned prize categories caught fresh for your discerning palates!
1st place: n. 5 STEEM
2nd place: n. 2 steembasicincome shares
popular vote: n. 2 steembasicincome share (remember to vote your favorite!)
Best comment to the stories: n. 1 steembasicincome share
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Vote, vote, vote your favorite story (and win 2 SBI)!
Use the #finishthestory tag.
Try to post your story the earliest possible and not at the last moment (or after the results! argh!)
Respect the dreadful 500 words limit! o_0
Help our contest & workshop to grow by giving it some visibility.
And now.. let's dive into today's story!
The Taste of Chicken
by @f3nix
"What do you feel now?" The scalpel of a monotonous voice, cold as the halogen light blinding him.
"Let me go".
A sudden electric shock followed and almost broke the arched vertebrae of the specimen n. 19-B, while penetrating his limbs.
"What do you feel?"
"The ... the taste of a chicken".
Dense whispering, silent annotations, white everywhere.
He was floating in that white, for hours, perhaps days. Subtle lines, at the corners of his eyes. The last bulwark of Euclidean geometries. Over him, the ceiling was like an enormous virus. Not alive, not dead. Up there, all the gluttony of a pulsating white blasphemy was unfolding over his impotent being. A dodecaphony, ever hungry of new semitones in the musical scale of his moribund ego.
He felt his soul's entrails slowly peeled like an onion. That non-color was slipping inside him, like a sickly glucose sludge, inside every cavity, along every neuron, hair, capillary. It was a profound evil, different from pain. Pain is a vowel. If you're good enough, you can observe it from the outside of yourself till you inevitably lose consciousness.
That, instead. That was nothing less than a grinding profanation of his soul.
"Now. Some feelings?"
"Feeeeeeelings ..." was the mumbled answer, the sound resembling the broken lung of a deflating accordion.
Silent annotations following.
The synaptic stimulation was proceeding well, soon they could present the product to Mother Unit. It was said that, in prehistoric times, the human being populated the nano-swarm, when it was still called Earth. According to certain niche schools of thought, this.. thing.. could have been at the top of the food-chain. Go figure.
A new product, very efficient in its own way and not missing that pleasant touch of chaoticness, this human. No doubt that the Mother Unit would have liked it and find it entertaining, if not even useful.
The chief demiurge gently closed the skullcap of the specimen n. 19-B and left the room with its cohort of servile apprentices in tow. Enough for today.
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Join the fun! Here is how this contest works:
An unfinished fiction story or a script is posted.
You finish it with your own post or a comment in the comment section. A limit of 500 words is recommended.
WIN 5 STEEM + 5 @steembasicincome shares to the writers with the best endings and comments.
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Ash gets killed.. Eiji is forever alone.
On a more serious note, I now want to hear how you would depict the aftermath.
Let's do it. Jail break
Randall Flagg approves.
It was hard for me to finish the prompt, this week! Wanted to do something fit of this great universe. Here goes nothing!
https://steemit.com/finishthestory/@amirani/finish-the-story-contest-week-38
Nah don't worry.. it's an exercise of creativity everything is very much welcome and supported!
Surprise!
Yup, another out of contest entry.
What can I say in my defense... I really could not find the time earlier in the week? 😓
Yearghh! Surprise a holy potassium fire column is heading on you right from the skyes 😂
Jokes apart, I'm happy that you could do it Ale!
(Fire column in 3..2..1..).
Muh entry!
https://steemit.com/finishthestory/@michaias/finishthestory-week-38-feelings-nothing-more-than-feelings
Yo!
I had fun with this one but sorry if I have some errors I will read it again tomorrow and try to fix it up if I missed some of them.
https://steemit.com/finishthestory/@stever82/finish-the-story-contest-week-38-my-entry
Don't worry Steve! 👍
Here's my entry:
https://steemit.com/finishthestory/@cyemela/finish-the-fiction-story-contest-week-38-bananafish
Here comes the proud @cyemela!
I'm at a loss for words ...
https://steemit.com/finishthestory/@tristancarax/the-taste-of-chicken
Tris I'm going to check your prompt, sorry for the delay!
You seem like you’re on top of things with many more things above you. 🙏🏼
Hahah could be ;-) I just wanted to tell you that your prompt is in my potassium ever rich thoughts!
An me again: https://steemit.com/finishthestory/@erh.germany/finish-the-story-contest-the-taste-of-chicken
This time: Tschikn dinner.
Let's see what the week brings.
Forgive me my sassiness, as I recommended holidays to the author of the beginning of the story. ;-) lol
Can we begin next time innocent and flowery? I beg the authors would hate to put some horrors onto it. HaHa!!!!!
P.S. congrats to the bigger votes, @bananafish!
Innocent, fluffy and flowery will be!
My Entry: https://steemit.com/finishthestory/@sarez/the-taste-of-chicken-freewrite-for-finishthestory-contest-38
Welcome back Sarez! :-D