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RE: Short Fiction for Finish the Story Contest- A Thousand Windows

in #finishthestory6 years ago (edited)

Your tale was entertaining, but I didn't find the end satisfying. I'm not sure why. Perhaps it's because I'm annoyed that she was hanged. Joining the monastery that killed her....I don't know.
But it was very well told and creative. An author has complete control of characters. That's the wonderful part about writing. Readers just go along for the ride.

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Well said @agmoore a new perspective.
Sometimes I don't have complete control of my characters, ideas can be that way.
Many Thanks and Keep Steemin!

I know, and once I create them, they're real for me. Of course, keep Steemin. Where else would this happen?

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