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RE: Awakenings (Finish The Story Entry)

in #finishthestory6 years ago

more children, dragged away from their howling parents, echoed in the harsh cry of the wind.

I like the way you weave the howling in the story into the wind. Resonates so with current events. Makes the point more poignant.

Also see that you picked up on the dimension--had to educate myself for that one.

Effective end that gives us insight into the wife, and the relationship.

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