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RE: 50 word Story Contest Week #16 - The Minefield
I really enjoyed this 50 word story. For me it had a flintlock poignancy that would've kept me going if it were longer.
"They are the heartbeat of a dragon" is probably the coolest line I've read today
You are too kind, prufarchy! Glad you liked it = )