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RE: Check, Please - Fifty Word Challenge
You seem to be obsessed with marriage right now. What's up with that?
But seriously, I enjoyed this story, and I feel for the poor server. She seems to have picked up on the fact that things are not going well between these two, and all she can do is offer sweets in a vain attempt to remove the pall cast upon the restaurant by their failing marriage!