Eyes Wide Shut (Steemit 50-word Story Contest Entry)

in #fiftywords • 8 years ago

35322.jpg

NO! Not a coach in sight
I can’t save her
I can’t show my face again
On the tracks he sat
The train, inching closer
A little boy, laughing in the background
Why didn’t he just take the train mommy?
He did honey, in the only way he knew how...

#coach #story #twist
8 years ago in #fiftywords by
$0.51
  • Past Payouts $0.51
  • - Author $0.39
  • - Curators $0.12
31 votes
Reply 4
Sort:  
  • Trending
    • [-]
     8 years ago 

    Nice story @advent.

    And yes, you got everything right

    $0.00
      Reply
      [-]
       8 years ago 

      Great, thanks so much for letting me know. I'm looking forward to reading everyone else's stories as well!

      $0.00
        Reply
        [-]
         8 years ago 

        Great story, I hope you win

        $0.00
          Reply
          [-]
           8 years ago 

          Thank you!

          Coin Marketplace

          STEEM 0.25
          TRX 0.20
          JST 0.038
          BTC 95773.12
          ETH 3595.18
          USDT 1.00
          SBD 3.80