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RE: Slaughterhouse - Part 14: Cow's Can't Fly!
Now for the real comment.
Really? 51 cows flying their way to steal MORE cows? Has it not been enough crimes already?
Hmm. I guess the amount of power Clarabelle's feeling makes her feel untouchable.
I like what you've left for me. A true challenge indeed. Garnet is especially a person I like; lots to do there. ^^
I shall deliver in the coming days, no doubt.
No crime here ... those cows were purchased from John Svashta.
Oh snap! You're right! These early morning hours and my memory ... not the best combination I see.
Hmmm. But this does give me an idea. One you may not particularly like. Or maybe like a lot. :p I better jot it down before I forget! :P scribble scribble scribble
I had to go back and reread all of the chapters, I was losing track of 🐄 cows.
Now that you mentioned it, I'm happy you did that part of the homework for me! ;)
Jokes aside, I'll most likely re-read everything also ^^ Or maybe I'll wait 'til we're done... in 2019. :P
I'll try my best and get my part done this week, but I'll admit, I want to get everything out of the way before taking on the next part of "Slaughterhouse", simply because I really want to devote to it in full. You know, to come up with something interesting for you. :P
Take your time ... no rush. I have some dogs to draw!
Lol where's Baron Feather Pen is this long debate of yours? After reading both of you admitting to re-read all the chapters, probably I am the only one with a fresh full script content in mind.
I quite like Part 14, although it turns out completely different from the way I was thinking about it, when @braveheart told me that she was going to write it in our previous communication. I honestly was thinking to go straight to Charles case but @braveheart even successfully wind the tale up a bit to my view (remember I am looking at it as a film not as a series). Clarabelle for my surprised, once a kind and sweet has becoming some sort of a manipulative witch, and Garnet... another character was added to the tale, which I think stretched the tale to more opportunities to expansion but somewhat after 14 parts I was thinking of a more closing writing approach. Let's say the 14 parts is the pick of the tale, from now on we have another more or less 14 parts to close it down and to go towards another script. What do you both think about it. I made a comment based on my reading experience, film script studies and eventually as part of the team.
I could see it as a pretty cool animated film in the "style of Chicken Run", but a pipe dream at this point. I think the story will develop and end organically. I hope to continue writing with @svashta, we have been having fun with this.
It is actually amazing, I thought I was going to contribute, good luck for you both!! <3