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RE: Slaughterhouse - Part 10 - Bob to the Rescue
This is my favorite of yours yet! Oh man! I love the new bossy Clarabelle! It really shows what power can do to a "person".
And the way she turned on Bob! Oh my, I loved it! :D
First I was kind of sad when you let John live, because I envisioned him dead and had some idea about what you might write... But you surprised me completely! I absolutely loved this part! :D
I can't wait to find some time and write part 11!
I’m so glad you like it! John Svashta needed to stay in the story, we can’t kill off your character!
Can’t wait to see what you do with Jim Smith , who is currently running from the law.
But... Death is part of life, and with him dead we could speak some more of his past, tell why he's living alone, perhaps even introduce his bastard son. Who knows where we could've gone with that :P But what is done, is done. I will
actwrite accordingly.Well then~~~~ You'll just have to wait and see ;P
Can't wait to see what you come up with!