I liked this very much! More than liked, I think I picked up some stuff I should add more of to my writing.

I could really see the concordia's massive body as Jason marveled at it, in part thanks to the comparisons with mountains and the mental image of a snowy array, heh.

That selfish girl could have at least told the officers she'd planted drugs in his baggage! At least to save him some explaining back there.

If anything, I think his reactions to what happened may have been a tad rushed, or perhaps simply too structured for such a shocking moment. That said, they're also pretty believable. Really well done!