This was a brilliant short story, so much was there hanging in the story, the there is just so much more that I want from this.
I am genuinely excited about this story, I hope that there is more to come?
This was a brilliant short story, so much was there hanging in the story, the there is just so much more that I want from this.
I am genuinely excited about this story, I hope that there is more to come?
Thank you for your feedback. This story has been well received which is appreciated. I may take another look at it and develop the story some more - it certainly has room for further exploration.