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RE: A Day in the Clouds (Chapter 3) - The Hours Between 0700 and 0800
Your writing style is much smoother. I feel so much more at home in an academic genre...make a point, back it up. When writing stories I feel like I'm fumbling around. Is it long enough, is it too long? I hate writing dialogue. You have a fan as well. When I read your stories, it feels like I've picked up a good book. When I read mine, I think...This sucks! LOL
The amazing @dreemit once reminded me "we are our own greatest critics," so trust me when I say that your writing style comes through splendidly :D I feel the same way about the way I write, the only difference is that I know that it's always too long hahaha!