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RE: Time heals all wounds - An original story - fiction - chapter 5
I finished The Lottery Council and the Night Gods II is shaping up nicely... there was a big surprise in the last chap. I had a dr's appointment today and she read some of the Lottery council- Now she's going to go back and read it all.
Any tips would be very welcome, this is a work in progress. I love your style but I've tried and this is where it ends..I write like this and can't make it more complicated, but it's easy to read I think...I've read too many Danielle Steele books...lol
There's not a thing wrong with your style... The only thing wrong is when people try to copy others- it comes off phony. You have a good style, it's yours and you should stick with it.
Thank you. I really appreciate your input. I've read your one story last night...and I like the way you think....I left a comment on your post.
Thank you... It's been awhile!