RE: Slaughterhouse - Part 14: Cow's Can't Fly!
Lol where's Baron Feather Pen is this long debate of yours? After reading both of you admitting to re-read all the chapters, probably I am the only one with a fresh full script content in mind.
I quite like Part 14, although it turns out completely different from the way I was thinking about it, when @braveheart told me that she was going to write it in our previous communication. I honestly was thinking to go straight to Charles case but @braveheart even successfully wind the tale up a bit to my view (remember I am looking at it as a film not as a series). Clarabelle for my surprised, once a kind and sweet has becoming some sort of a manipulative witch, and Garnet... another character was added to the tale, which I think stretched the tale to more opportunities to expansion but somewhat after 14 parts I was thinking of a more closing writing approach. Let's say the 14 parts is the pick of the tale, from now on we have another more or less 14 parts to close it down and to go towards another script. What do you both think about it. I made a comment based on my reading experience, film script studies and eventually as part of the team.
I could see it as a pretty cool animated film in the "style of Chicken Run", but a pipe dream at this point. I think the story will develop and end organically. I hope to continue writing with @svashta, we have been having fun with this.
It is actually amazing, I thought I was going to contribute, good luck for you both!! <3
(I am replying to your comment to make sure you see this reply)
I agree with @braveheart29 on:
I don't believe there is any reason we should be considering whether or not to further develop the plots, and to think about when we wish to end it. We just write down the words that come to mind. When the words stop coming for us to write down, the story will end.
Now, regarding your contributions.
I have been thinking long and hard about all you said, and have come to the following conclusion(s):
I very much enjoy writing The slaughterhouse alongside with @braveheart29, and I believe we've become quite a team. And 14 parts down the line, I don't see how another writer would fit in with the story, regardless of you having read all the parts. I believe yet another writer would not only present me with another challenging task of getting used to your style of writing as well as it would be difficult for the reader to now need to get used to not just 2 writing styles, but 3.
I have therefore decided I would prefer we finish the story ourselves (@braveheart29 and I).
This does NOT mean you need to silently sit in a corner. Contribution in the form of ideas, comments, constructive criticism and the like are always very welcome.
Should you write a part yourself, I promise to read it, but don't promise to continue on it.
You can contribute if you like.