Having not read any of the earlier episodes I wasn't sure how i would go with this, but decided to give it a go. Glad I did, too. I got the drift of the story, as least as it is contained here in this segment. And the writing flowed so well. I wasn't jarred out out of it at any point, and actually found myself wanting to read through.
Thank you!
Since I wrote this as a part of a complete chapter before posting it here, I wasn't sure how well it was going to split up into smaller pieces for steemit. Especially since the chapter this one came from didn't have as much going on in the smaller segments as it does going on in the entire chapter.