What a buildup. Loved reading through the progression, as you revealed more of the underlying premise, just to shake it up one more time. Maybe it's the best story of yours I have read...
...yet.
What a buildup. Loved reading through the progression, as you revealed more of the underlying premise, just to shake it up one more time. Maybe it's the best story of yours I have read...
...yet.
Thank you so much naquoya! It's always so hard to know whether you're writing to obscurely or if readers on the other side are thinking, "I get it already, jeez!" So it's wonderful to hear that the revelations came at a good pace :) So happy you enjoyed it!
Also, I shared your story in last weeks The Library
Oh my, @naquoya, thank you!