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RE: Cheap Transportation - Short Story Contest Entry for Art Prompt Writing Contest #8
Great job with this story! I love how you expose the down-to-earth nature of their friendship.
I would have loved to see the story expand a bit, building up to a big argument that meant Artie going one way and Bud the other - getting a bit more dramatic and showing the end of the friendship - in more ways than one.
Still, it's a good story as it is. :)
Thank you for your comments. I'm working to get my "writer on"; that's the advantage of writing here - there is so much to learn and feedback to learn from. It will come. Even in contests, I see myself only in competition with myself to do the best I can.
That's the best way to look at it, really :)