For anyone who's curious on what topic I gave, here: Feelings on Chatting with a Human-Controlled Bot
noms cookie, handing cookie jar Here. Take some cookies. You're way better than I expected. :nom:
Honestly when you said it's going to be a bit out, I was thinking that you're going off the topic or something. But it isn't off at all (well don't demote yourself that much, finishing it in one day is already good, I may be still writing it if you really gave me one hahaha, maybe I should do some upgrades on creativity I guess? :lul:). Well an idea is purely just a motivation and inspiration to start working on something, and there isn't anything wrong or right in it (unlike school essays), as long as the story is impressive at all aspects, an ordinary idea could be a very good story. And you did it yay.
Joke: I can see my (and Misty's) shadows in the whole thing (with exceptions for the ending).
From the part where I read where you starting to mention that the bot's name as Mirshtrie (the pronunciation got really close to Misty's name hahaha), also with the inverted hair and eye colours, yep that's exactly the inverted version of her (or should I just say me myself) in another world.
Hung up endings... OK I'll wait for it (I even sensed shadows of the Greeting Bot™ in it, or is it just me?). continues nomming cookie Want more?
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Hooman-controlled bot: Yep, and loves to nom on chocolate :nom:
A person's feelings: Yep, where the protagonist himself is an app reviewer huh, never see that coming :lul:
Yeah you're good. BUT DON'T LEMME SEE YOU DEMOTE YOURSELF AGAIN. YOU'RE LEVELS ABOVE ME NOW.
Rating: 9/10
Reason for giving 9: So I can give 11 for the final part :lul:
Happy to see that you actually like it...the lack of self confidence mainly comes from the fact that I rarely write fiction. Probably need to do it more, I actually like it but always got the feeling of "oh boi here we go again" whenever I make some progress. Fun ride, 11/10 would do it again (?) :lul:
Noms cookie I took the name because thinking of names can be hard...meanwhile for the character design part it's just purely coincidental :lul: It's until I got to 90% progress I realized that "oh it's an inverted version of Misty but okay". She has long hair, too, so probably that makes it a little slightly different :lul:
Shadows of the greeting bot... Just a little in the front, probably, but thanks for giving me an idea to fill up later plotsTakes another cookie I purposely hung it here so that I can either just stop it here (and get hated, probably), or continue it with weirder stuff.
Also...I think the story will go dark pretty quickly when the time comes and my current plot is not modified. So if you are linking this to you probably that's a bad idea :pain:But well it might take some more time for it to happen. I just got another amazing writing prompt from another server and honestly I like it :lul: still figuring out possible plots for that super weird title, but maybe you'll see it in a bit (just not tonight!).
Thanks for reading :nom: and cookies!
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