Hi @prechyrukky. I think the text lacks atmosphere. That is, what is created around history. The characters also lack psychology. I will wait for the next chapter to see how this story unfolds. For now I am intrigued.
Hi @prechyrukky. I think the text lacks atmosphere. That is, what is created around history. The characters also lack psychology. I will wait for the next chapter to see how this story unfolds. For now I am intrigued.
Thanks for the corrected. I just posted the chapter two on my blog
Thank you