Superb! As someone who played Skyrim, of course I know this early game quest, but you make it even more... how do you say it, "has more depth to it"? The point is it's good, so good that it's better than how the game tell the whole thing, in my opinion.

On a side note.. I think I need to tell you this, if you happen to see your top ss used by someone else's post, which is me, it's because I put it in my "Gaming Posts of the Week" post series and your post is mentioned. I hope you don't mind. But if you do, just tell me and I will remove it.

Keep up the good work!