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RE: The Hunt -- Part One

in #fiction7 years ago

Over time, James grew up. He was strong and tall and friendly. The people of Hemlin loved him even while they thought he might be a bit off. For James told everyone in Hemlin he would one day climb The Owl.

And this is the perfect way to close a chapter. A beautiful, evocative paragraph, with a hook at the end of it.

Thank you very much for sharing.

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